You feel my fingertips, you won’t forget my lips,
the depth of the abyss, a sarcophagus kiss…
You feel the insects crawl, you hold onto your soul,
petrified of the nightfall, this night you will recall.
I’m become everything, I am under your skin,
the cerebral chords within, I stroke and make them sing.
This is the final night, of devastating fright,
such a magnanimous sight, showered in dim sunlight.
Succumb to the friction,
can’t escape the addiction,
palindrome motion, archaic notion,
supermassive black hole suction, primal attraction,
achieve combustion, ashes of mortal passion.
■ 2014 / Song Lyrics / Last Updated September 2, 2014 by Phlegyas /
Nice! 😀
Ah, thank you Sithboy mom! xD
Loved it!
That’s great! Thank you!
You’ve got a way with words mister!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ah, thank you lil Kitty! But, I’ve read your stuff too, and you’re great! Why didn’t you add your blog address? I’m sure people would love to see some of your writing too!
what kittiekaity said! hot hot hot hot hot hot hot … melllllllllllllllllllllllltin
Glad you liked it!
Don’t take this the wrong way, but I think you invest too much effort to make everything rhyme? If that makes sense. Try something a bit more freeform, it could surprise you how good it’d turn out!
Not to take anything away from this, it is a good piece 🙂 No offence…
Well, I don’t normally do that, do I? But, I can see what you mean about this specific one, thank you for the suggestion I’ll keep it in mind!
“SUCCUMB TO THE FRICTION” <3
I’m glad you approve! x)
Holy shit it’s like fucking Death. No, like actually fucking with Death! Awesome dude. You mind if I print this one too? ^.^
Awwww thank you SO MUCH! You always say the best things. Of course you can print it silly. Your lil’ girl’s gonna be a real goth with all the stuff you’ve glued on her wall hahaha
How’s she doing anyway? Give her a huge kiss for me? Hope you’re doing great too, I should give you a call soon, we haven’t spoken in ages!
Seriously, what is it with you? Why can’t you just use words normal people use? LOL! Just kidding, it was great 🙂
I’d expect them foreigners to complain, what’s your problem? hahah You’re right though, I do like to use Hellenic-rooted words. They come natural. I wonder why xP
You did another some time back did you not? Something about a bed, loved that one too. It seems that this genre fits you! Keep it up!
The bed of 1000 inmates, of course you’d remember that one hahaha xD just kidding. Thank you girl!
goth wannabe lol
Not at all mate, just something that came to me while walking home from work.
troll…
He’s allowed to not like it silly
He’s a troll!
OK
So… when are you coming to Manchester? 😉
😉 soon?
can’t decide if hot or gross lol
Let me know when you make up your mind!
You still have your way with words. I’m glad. Keep writing…
That’s so bizarre, I swear to God I thought of the past, earlier today.
Thank you for your comment 🙂